Nowadays, people have to work for longer hours under stressful conditions. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Suggest some ways by which the job conditions can be improved.
It’s a hard nut to crack to get an easy and stress-free job in the fast-paced world today. People are ready to grab job opportunities to make both ends meet no matter how much difficult the conditions are. I agree with the statement but there are possible solutions too to avoid stressful surroundings at a workplace.
In the era of machines, people are hardly ready to do physical work rather depend on machines to get their job done automatically, efficiently and accurately. For example, computer has capability to do work faster than a human being with more accuracy. Therefore, this automation is affecting work atmosphere which is cutting job opportunities short. Thus, competition to get a job is far outweigh then the opportunities. In consequence, it is making people stressed to work under unexpected conditions in the fear to lose a job. Subsequently, they feel more stress while think about fulfilling their family expectations and needs under the fearful circumstances. Sometime, an employer also creates dread situations to get more work which coerce the workers to work under stressful conditions such as a target to achieve within insufficient duration.
On the contrary, as one’s saying that “don’t spur a willing horse”, so employer should think about their employees and must create a healthy environment for them where they can feel safe and can perform efficiently. An appropriate working hour duration and adequate breaks in between helps a lot to bust the stress. In addition, stress management counselling sessions should be organized at the workplace to keep the work atmosphere healthy.
All things considered, government should think about their people to create more job opportunities to remove stressful atmosphere among them. Moreover, some strict policies should be in place for employer which can give a stress-free infrastructure to an employee.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for example, in addition, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39130434783 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19631321382 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2334299916 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.466666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26666666667 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311696023631 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10638945313 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513162891299 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177171414991 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592789132201 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.