do you agree or disagree with the following statement ?
It is better to have lots of different friends than it is to have just a few friends.
“friendship” means having a good relationship with somebody you like. In today’s world it is very difficult to find good and trustworthy friends. In my opinion Having lots of several friends are much better than having few because of three reasons which I am going to explain in the following essays.
The First reason is You can learn plenty of new things for example, in 2013 when I travel to India, it was my first time going to a different country with change in language, culture, religious, colour and many more. My Indian friends helped me to learn their languages as well as English the common language. Similarly, they taught several new cultures which was very excited to me. Furthermore, they showed me their masjid, temple as well as church that I have never seen in my country.
The Second reason is they can help you out in varieties of problems such as, in school or college they can help you with studies likewise in job or any other work place. For example, I had many problems in studies due to change in language while studying in Indian college, they helped me to be a diligence student and over come to my problems. They were always supportive and never left me behind even though I was from different country.
The third reason, you never feel alone with Having more number of friends. You can always enjoy with them by going out to playing ground or clubs as well as long trip to different city or country as a purpose of vocations.
In brief, having lots of different friends are better in case of friends as a teacher, standing with you in all problems and spending good time whenever feel alone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
... cultures which was very excited to me. Furthermore they shown me their masjid, temple as w...
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Line 2, column 400, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[1]
Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'showed'?
Suggestion: showed
...as very excited to me. Furthermore they shown me their masjid, temple as well as chur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, likewise, second, similarly, so, third, well, while, for example, in brief, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 290.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65517241379 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59061692963 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537931034483 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 618.680645161 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0677401919 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.846153846 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3076923077 5.45110844103 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284203196038 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105825351337 0.076458572812 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103810832512 0.0737576698707 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188148608131 0.150856017488 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108196795466 0.0645574589148 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 86.8835125448 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.