Some people think that art is essential subject for children at school while other think it is waste of time. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
"the purpose of art is washing the dust of daily life off our soul". In the world every child is an artist. The problem is how to remain an artist once we grow up. In the same manner with, the acid declare that should the art is the important subject for children or not? Through this essay, I will examine the all topic from the both points in following subsections.
The first paragraph of the topic, the people who believe that the Earth is important? Broadly speaking, there are two main reason behind this. The first and foremost important reason the hidden talent. However, through the art activities in school or disclose that talent of the children. The children have best way to choose their vision of the future. Therefore, the are defined in many ways like; singing sports dance and so on. As well as, it also help the children to enhance the skills such as; personal skills, cognitive skills. In addition to this, does 2nd main reason for the importance of Art in schools that is profession. Whereas, the children choose the art according to their interest. Apart from this, they make a profession of their interest. Because the every people is do that in the interest on that activities. A suitable example of this here is a survey was conducted by University of Columbia and the result was that survey the popular personalities of the world are famous and success because they did worked according to their own interest.
Further, the second paragraph consider the people who believe that the art is totally waste of time? In this paragraph, basically two main reasons are defined. The first and foremost reason is the extra burden. Therefore, the parents are think that the art classes in the schools are burden on the head of children. However, the art activities are good for the children, but the perception of the parents the art is a lot for the children. In addition to this, the second reason that is according to the perception of parents the academic performance are affected. Moving forward, the children show less interest in the study and art activities describe the children from their career. According to the parents the arts can not provide the good opportunity for the career.
Concluding, what are above said, I believe that the parents and schools not pressurise the children for the extra curricular activities. Children should follow their interest.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, well, whereas, apart from, broadly speaking, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1996.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 409.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88019559902 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54057643214 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471882640587 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.9 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 16.0 2.52805611222 633% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8916753852 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.9259259259 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1481481481 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85185185185 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202702561672 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571084987207 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625981152709 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125945147582 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489455642077 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.43 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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