Some people believe that teachers have a important role to play in the educational success, while others think it is the student's attitude that matters. Discuss both views and share your opinion.
Education is a very essential part of human's life, without it their survival gets affect. From basic education to postgraduation, tutors acts as potter, who shapes a student and prepares them for career opportunities, claim by one group. Other comments that it merely depends on pupil's tendency to acquire knowlege. Perspective of both the mass will be discuss further.
Teachers, on one hand, are major bodies contributing in education system because they are professionally trained to teach people gracefully. Though there are lots of mordern technologies available for self-learning, it is only instructor, who can actually use them in proper manner. So that it increases ease of learning. For instance, in India nearly 8 out of 10 government or self finance institutes are adapting smart class concept, under which professor delivers lectures not only using powerpoint presentation but also adding animation. As a result, pupils eagerly attains classes and top examination.
Contrary, in some cases, brain power of student overweigh the advantages of learning with teacher. In this matter, student's intelligence, curiosity, awareness as well as learning potential plays crucial role. It depends on student whether to accept acquaintance given by lecturer or not. In addition, brilliant mind can crack examination by self-study without basic necessities. For example, last year in Maharashtra board examination, a boy from poor family came first, although he had not attend any school or coaching.
To summarize, for getting academic achievement involves several factors such as teacher's efforts, skills, way of providing knowledge with that student's concentration and learning potential are also needed. Hence, equal contribution is required from both the sides, then only higher goals can be reached.
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- Some people believe that teachers have a important role to play in the educational success, while others think it is the student's attitude that matters. Discuss both views and share your opinion. 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'pupils'' or 'pupil's'?
Suggestion: pupils'; pupil's
...ther comments that it merely depends on pupils tendency to acquire knowlege. Perspecti...
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...echnologies available for self-learning, it is only instructor, who can actually ...
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Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...can actually use them in proper manner. So that it increases ease of learning. For inst...
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Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...crack examination by self-study without basic necessities. For example, last year in Maharashtra ...
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'attended'.
Suggestion: attended
... family came first, although he had not attend any school or coaching. To summariz...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...s, way of providing knowledge with that students concentration and learning potential ar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, hence, if, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, as well as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62408759124 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05469220058 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.722627737226 0.561755894193 129% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.3653471577 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3125 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.125 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123114205098 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0369985382377 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358229442013 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0703268779065 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324436908184 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.02 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.42 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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