Restriction air travel is the only way to prevent air pollution.
Do you agree?
Air pollution has been the epicenter of discussion in multiple forums and a conclusive unanimous agreement is yet to be achieved. Different distinguished individuals have expressed their views both in favor and against the very idea of restriction air travel through multiple modes of communication be it a main stream media or be it the social media. Below in essay of mine I would like to enunciate that air pollution's main reason is not air travel and will give some examples that we cannot prevent air pollution by restricting the air travel.
The main reason of air pollution is vehicles not airplane. Moreover, the air pollution cause by planes in not that affected and it is more affected by cars, lories, and factories. In addition, people nowadays go to the office by using their own vehicles' instead of public transportation. if people will use more public transportation to travel than there will be a less vehicles and pollution on the roads and it can reduce the most of the pollution from air.
Continuing to this another reason is factories. Many factories are not using the eco system machinery and still use the smoked one machine which creates a lot of fuels and gases in air. Furthermore, if government put some strict laws by banning the smoked machines than the pollution can be reduced from the air.
While on the other hand, there are people who will still continue to wrangling about the facts or air pollution. I would like to conclude that air travel is not causing much air pollution the reason are private vehicles, factories. So this can be reduced by taking u some strict steps by government.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 289, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...icles instead of public transportation. if people will use more public transportat...
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Line 3, column 366, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun vehicles is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ortation to travel than there will be a less vehicles and pollution on the roads and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, while, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 5.75862068966 295% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 279.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86379928315 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75885565798 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516129032258 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 424.8 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6218350151 50.4703680194 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.384615385 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.25397266985 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280732291889 0.242375264174 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106740852141 0.0925447433944 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0952723058554 0.071462118173 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182268855472 0.151781067708 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0827536125357 0.0609392437508 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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