Some people believe that the age limit for the drivers should be increased [Measure - M] to ensure road safety [Purpose - P].
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, we are living in a world where the prevention of traffic accidents is a heated topic and often discussed. It is universally believed that raising the legal driving age is an optimal approach to make roadways more secured. This essay shall explain my argument against the ineffectiveness of this solution and suggest the feasibility of superior alternatives to improve traffic safety.
The aforementioned method could be futile due to the fact that the problem of traffic accidents does not stem from younger drivers alone. In fact, reckless driving behaviors are reported to be equally prevalent among the youth and the elderly. Therefore, the latter are also prone to violate traffic laws and cause dangers to others. Vietnam perfectly exemplifies this situation. According to the General Statistics Office of Vietnam, there has been an increasing number of older drivers committing traffic offenses such as running red lights or speeding in recent years, equivalent to over a quarter of the traffic participants.
In lieu of banning younger drivers, it is highly recommended that governments adopt these following solutions. First of all, further severe punishments shall be imposed on traffic offenders. For instance, their drivers’ licenses should be confiscated indefinitely. Another viable method is to allocate more funding to the enhancement of infrastructures such as roadway widening or constructions of overpasses, which will help disperse the traffic flow and reduce the likelihood of crashes.
In conclusion, because increasing the legal age for driving may be an ineffective way to alleviate accidents, I would argue that one of the proposed solutions would be a preferable option.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53992395437 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09159380609 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653992395437 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5493613699 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.076923077 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115603371992 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0391255501192 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486043123075 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0719826224334 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302501486607 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.51 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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