TPO 42
In this set of materails the reading passege discusses that the glass that used in the buildings led to damage to thousents of birds in each year. Because the birds crush with this galss during flying.Thus, in the passge suggested several solution for this problem. While, in the listening the professor casts doubts on whjat is presented in the text and believes that Non of these solutions cannot stop birds damage.
First of all, in the text it is clearly mentioned that the one-way glass that people can see out but birds connot see through a window. However, the professor claims that this kind of glass word as a mirror for birds and this glass is bad like and other regular glass. Because, the birds cannot understand mirrors and when they see the picture of trees or other thisngs on the glass they move towad this windows.
In addition, the professor disagrees with this idea that the colorful designs can solve the problem. He says that the birds see this designs as a open holes and they fly toward this designs and crush to them. And he says that this designs should be was big enough to can watch by birds but in this shape this designs become the inside of duildings very durk so people used small designs and it led to they do not work efficiently.
Finally, in the text it is stated that the magnetic fields in the buildings can solve the problem. Because birds naturally used from magnetic fields for navigation.The professor subscribes that birds used magnetic fields only for long distance travels not for short trip. And birds used their eyes for short trips. Therefore, magnetic fields is not practical solution.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 76
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 148, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...age to thousents of birds in each year. Because the birds crush with this galss during ...
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Line 1, column 202, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
...rds crush with this galss during flying.Thus, in the passge suggested several soluti...
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Line 1, column 232, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun solution seems to be countable; consider using: 'several solutions'.
Suggestion: several solutions
...ng flying.Thus, in the passge suggested several solution for this problem. While, in the listeni...
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Line 5, column 78, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...with this idea that the colorful designs can solve the problem. He says that the ...
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Line 5, column 146, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...says that the birds see this designs as a open holes and they fly toward this des...
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Line 5, column 179, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...gns as a open holes and they fly toward this designs and crush to them. And he says ...
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Line 5, column 268, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...this designs should be was big enough to can watch by birds but in this shape thi...
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Line 7, column 133, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oblem. Because birds naturally used from magnetic fields for navigation.The profe...
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Line 7, column 166, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...ed from magnetic fields for navigation.The professor subscribes that birds used ma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, so, therefore, thus, while, in addition, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 22.412803532 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 30.3222958057 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1373.03311258 99% => OK
No of words: 286.0 270.72406181 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74475524476 5.08290768461 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30060630671 2.5805825403 89% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 145.348785872 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48951048951 0.540411800872 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 385.2 419.366225166 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.55342163355 84% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6177843447 49.2860985944 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.384615385 110.228320801 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 21.698381199 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06452816374 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 4.19205298013 215% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 4.45695364238 179% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.497857845024 0.272083759551 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177719820195 0.0996497079465 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818242725698 0.0662205650399 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.286936083536 0.162205337803 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0973166170701 0.0443174109184 220% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.3589403974 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 53.8541721854 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.0289183223 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.2367328918 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.42419426049 86% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 63.6247240618 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.