Top ten countries for production and consumption of electricity.
The bar chart demonstrate the ten highest nations throughout the world in producing and consuming electricity in 2014.
Overall, it is obivous that China and United States are the highest countries in both consuming and producing electricity. While the least one is Korea and following it Germany which is consuming electricity more than producing it.
To be more specific, China topped the list with almost 5400 billion kWh produced and about 5320 billion kWh used. However, this was followed by United states with consumption equals 4099 billion kWh and production of 3866 billion kWh. Following this tha third country with production and consumption of 1048 billion kWh. Top 5 enlisted Russia, Japan and India figures were comparable around the 600 and 900 billion kWh marks. While the next three countries Canda, France and Brazil were respectively with significantly smaller figures for both consumption and production. Finaly, the lowest country is Korea with production and consumption rates below 500 billion kWh.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...France and Brazil were respectively with significantly smaller figures for both c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.425 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71281680178 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59375 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.2911632614 43.030603864 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255639423154 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108308254405 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687958465148 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117833191174 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696175502194 0.0819641961636 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 11.4140731707 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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