You are a student at an English language school in Brighton and are living in private accommodation with other flat mates. You have not had hot water or heating for some time. The landlord’s workmen have tried to fix the problem but without success.
Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter,
• state your reason for writing
• describe the problems and explain how you feel
• propose a solution and risk the landlord to take action
Dear Mr. Saad,
I am writing to bring to your attention to the non-availability of hot water in the washroom and the problem we flat mates are facing in our daily routine.
We are six tenants living in your apartment rented for the last two years. We have never been given a chance to complain about our accommodation except the provision of hot water from the last month. I am a student at St. Mary’s English language school in Brighton which is quite far away from this apartment. My other roommates also have to travel too far to their destinations daily. When we come back, we are deprived of hot water in this bad cold weather. This would make all of us very frustrated because of the freezing temperature of water. It is very kind of you to bring a plumber last week but all his efforts were in vain.
I would suggest you to contact another plumber who can resolve this matter otherwise we would have to find another accommodation.
Awaiting for your prompt response.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: AWAITING_FOR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'awaiting' or 'waiting for'?
Suggestion: Awaiting; Waiting for
... have to find another accommodation. Awaiting for your prompt response.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 817.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64204545455 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64545234887 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642045454545 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9047422427 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207671194983 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721418548152 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385667773581 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0983529995761 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580577115615 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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