Scientists have been warning for many years about protecting the environment & we must limit the use of energy in our daily lives.
Despite warnings, many people do not do this.
What are the reasons for that and how people can be encouraged to take an interest in protecting the environment ?
Clean and pollution free environment is an essential part of our life. We are constantly warned by scientists to save the environment and decrease the consumption of energy in our day to day life so that we can avoid worst environmental conditions in the future. In this essay, we will discuss the reasons why people tend to ignore these issues and how to motivate them to save their surroundings from pollution?
Lack of knowledge is a major reason for polluted surroundings. People are not aware of the consequences when they do various actions, like throwing garbage on roads or burn plastic objects which emits smoke creating air pollution. Even though some people know the result but still they ignore it because of carelessness. For instance, they do not turn off the engine while waiting on the traffic light as they are in a hurry to leave, which in turn consumes more fuel and release harmful gases.
The government can take various steps to protect the environment and put limitations on the usage of energy resources. Different types of campaigns can be run, targeting the related crowd, to educate them about the dangerous effects of pollutants on troposphere and ozone layer. Non-profit organizations should collaborate with government to make things easy and approachable for locals. For example, dustbins should be placed at appropriate locations to avoid litter.
Taking everything into consideration, it is a combining step of people and government to stop the wastage of precious energy resources and also improve the quality of air by using them consciously.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16666666667 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93348379983 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647286821705 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2068868123 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.083333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286197078602 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873901116242 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342411156005 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140644686023 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364777481782 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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