At the present time, the population of some countries includes relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantage outweigh tge disadvantages.
Young age is the golden age of the life. It is age of spreading wings all around the world. In this modern era, few nations have high number of youngters as compared to old people. Is it have more advantages than the disadvantages? In this essay, I will explore the dimensions of this essay and shape up my opinion by the end.
One side of the argument there are number of people who beleive that the benefits of considerably outweigh its disadvantages. The main reason for beleiving this is that youth period is the first period of life where individuals meets with several challenges. Youngsters have more energy to do work in proper or systematic manner, have will power to do work in proficent way. It is also possible to say that youngsters have fresh blood to do work with industrious.
Moving to other advantages of having youngsters in the countries. First nad foremost, youngsters are born in twenty first century so they are well educated through which they can explore the world better. Moreover, they can developed the country more easily as compared to old politician. Proceeding further, youngsters have better thinking level than orthodox people because old people are narrow-minded and have conjusted ideas. The best epitome to this, In 2014, the survey was conducted by ' The Hindustan Times", they showed that european countries are highly developed due to high number of youngsters and have more youth power.
On the other hand, most of the people have this opinion that old people plays a major role in the society. First of all, if country is full of youngsters then definately, people will forget their roots. Secondly, from where peole will learn about custom, rituals, traditions and so on. Moreover, if people removed the old people the old people from the country it should proved as a bane for the nation because orthodox people have more life experience than the youngsters.
As we have seen, there are number of answers to this question. On balance, however, I tend to beleive that both plays a necessary role in the our life but for the development of country youth plays a major role. Individuals should encourges the youngsters to do best in thier life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1828.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90080428954 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63787080486 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495978552279 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.2863167227 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0476190476 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7619047619 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04761904762 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120825099402 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427846837585 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409535932889 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0749106150383 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327151367265 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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