Writing Task 1 – Line Graph
The line graph compares four different sectors in terms of acid rain emission in the UK from 1991 to 2007.
Overall, the volume of acid rain emissions caused by transportation and communication sector saw a slight increase over the period of 16 years. Meanwhile, the amount of acid rain emissions in the remainder sector decreased noticeably.
In the period of 1991 – 1997, the acid rain emissions from the sector of electricity, gas, and water supply started about 3.3 million of tones, after which it decreased dramatically by three times in 1997. The figure for electricity, gas and water supply continued to experience a gradually downward pattern, with the figure dropping to exactly 0.5 million of tones by the year 2007, while that of other industries also steadily decreased, but overtook electricity, gas and water supply, at approximately 1.2 million of tones.
Over the same period, the acid rain emissions from transport and communication varied more significantly than in the other sectors. It remained relatively stable at above 0.5 million of tones before doubling to reach the highest point of the whole line graph, at 1 million of tones, in 2005. By contrast, in the following two years, the volume of emissions decreased rapidly to about 0.7 million of tones. On the other hand, the emissions, contributed by domestic sector. Declined gradually over a 16-year period.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.0 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1173.0 965.302439024 122% => OK
No of words: 226.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19026548673 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84968462862 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544247787611 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 283.868780488 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 3.36585365854 297% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.556932177 43.030603864 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.3 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0604051131357 0.215688989381 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0286048562017 0.103423049105 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578170448288 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0573802017472 0.15604864568 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662932678807 0.0819641961636 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.