Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Museums are the place, where art, history, culture and ideas are displayed to view. Sometimes extra money is applied to present artist works. It is very controversial issue, whether charge is good or bad for admission. This essay will discuss about the merits and demerits of this topic.
First of all, art exhibition is not free for all the time. Usually, people along with their friends and family go to the museum in weekend. The place is over crowded so that the authority of the museum must be concerned about their security, otherwise some valuable art will be stolen. To maintain a strong security is not a cheap task, which needs extra money and authority collect this money from the public by applying admission charges. Secondly, open free access in the museums is too dangerous. For example, if people enter into the art gallery free of cost, they will make the place dirty and messy, which is not tolerable. Therefore, it had better to apply reasonable amount of entry fee. Furthermore, artist gets money from this source of money.
However, free entry museums also available in many cities. Though art is priceless, it should be free for exploring this art. Moreover many people believe that taking money for visiting museums or historical place is against freedom as they are not business market. Since children are discourages by this rule for entering into the museums. Therefore, it should be free for low age and minimal for others.
In summary, money is essential for conducting an organization properly. As this fee promoted the artistic value and museums facilities, these advantages outraced the disadvntages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in summary, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06273062731 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54042358503 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59778597786 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.884399923 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.2105263158 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2631578947 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26315789474 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248245230463 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778304830947 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477861205388 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153362959304 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056167637833 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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