You were recently impressed by a staff member at a store.
Write a letter describing your appreciation. In your letter include:
what the situation was
how you were helped
what you are going to do as a result of this good experience
Dear Sir / Madam,
Today I wanted to write about my pleasant experience with the sales executive named Lisa Green at the Best-Buy store on El-Camino Real road in Sunnyvale, CA. Please allow me to elaborate further.
I visited the Best-Buy store to get a new pair of wireless headphones for my phone. I was assisted by Lisa Green. I did not have enough information about the different headphones in the market and Lisa patients explained me all the different brands and the positives and negatives for them. I was really impressed by the honesty, integrity and customer focus shown by Lisa. Instead of going by brand value, she inquired about my needs and asked me about my daily use-cases and suggested which suited me. Although I liked a lesser dollar value headphones, she never tried to push me towards the more expensive headphones. Though it was a really tough decision, her product reviews and product demo really made my choice simple and I am super happy with my headphones.
I experienced a phenomenal experience at this store, I would not only be a regular customer at this store but also would recommend this store to my friend. Please send my regards and thank you to Lisa for the help I got from her.
Yours Sincerely,
Nitin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 115, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...my phone. I was assisted by Lisa Green. I did not have enough information about t...
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Line 5, column 292, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...d the positives and negatives for them. I was really impressed by the honesty, in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1035.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79166666667 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60687786163 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4101010005 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.25 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.08333333333 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0985514762544 0.216113520407 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0363098137535 0.0766984524023 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045469588008 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0768036409158 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635137850802 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.