Some parents, who stay at home instead of working think they need to be compensated by the
government.
Do you agree or disagree? Support your answer with relevant examples.
In many families, now a day both parents go to work in order to improve their living stands but there are some parents who make decision to stay home and look after their children. Therefore, some believe that government should pay financial assistance to such a parent. In this essay I agree with this statement and first discuss why government should pay household parents then will discuss what are the benefits of that to society.
Firstly, parents who stay at home have many household works to do. It is not just a 40 hour work a week but 24/7 in 365 days. Every second of every day those parent take care of another life, other than their everyday work. This type of work drain physical, emotional and mental health more than regular office job. Moreover, take care and develop a child cost more money since there are more needs of clothes, diapers and other primary resources like medicines. Therefore, stay at home parents need some finantial aid regularly.
Finally, the biggest benefit of this to society is children with good behavior and health since household parents can teach them good manner with positive health wellness. Also, studies show that children that have household parents usually perform better in their studies than parents how go to work. Furthermore, if government is willing to pay stay at home parent, it will raise the birthrates in countries where birthrate is dangerously low since parents are encourage to have children.
In conclusion, I strongly suggest that the government should pay stay at home parents since it will lead to good quality young generation ahead.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 173, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...d manner with positive health wellness. Also studies show that children that have ho...
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Line 5, column 464, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'encouraged'.
Suggestion: encouraged
...te is dangerously low since parents are encourage to have children. In conclusion, I s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98148148148 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42491921436 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559259259259 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.681515975 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.461538462 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158095320554 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724047602554 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659999324219 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104287157978 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401809049845 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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