You have had a class discussion on the purpose of television. Now your teacher has asked you to write a composition answering the following question:
Television entertains, but can it also educate?
Write your composition.
The world is changing in every second. Nowsaday, with the help of modern technology humans are able to update such information in just a few step, together with that is the appearance of a new activity which we call it watching television. But is watching television not just entertaning but also educating?
On the first aspect, people can enjoy watching movie, comedy and thriller on television. With the developement of modern technology, new types of television have been made in order to bring to the audience a more excited moment when watching. In addition, family can also sit together after dinner to watch television also the way that this device can be used to connect the relationships between family members.
Apart from using for entertaining, television is also the best way for education. At the present, there are numerous of educated programme which is very good for kids to watch. News and documentaries are also how the students and adults can learn from television.
In conclusion, television is a great invention which can both brings to the audience joys and knownledges. People should learn how to use the television effectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 138, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun step seems to be countable; consider using: 'few steps'.
Suggestion: few steps
...le to update such information in just a few step, together with that is the appearance o...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, second, so, apart from, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 975.0 1615.20841683 60% => OK
No of words: 190.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13157894737 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91851003614 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594736842105 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.5724762428 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6363636364 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2727272727 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138804698344 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567355881733 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366269314254 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0838966910467 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215908440702 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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