In town and cities, the large shopping mall should replace local shop. Do you agree or disagree?
In today's world, it is inevitable to ignore the presence of shopping malls as they are omnipresent and mushrooming everywhere. Recently, an ongoing debate on the replacement of local shops by large multinational organisations has raised an alarm. Many people think that in the metro cities small vendors must be replaced by shopping malls as they provide a slew of options for buying however, opponents believe otherwise. This essay will illustrate why large shopping stores should replace local shops.
To begin with, towns and metro cities are filled with shopping malls in every nook and corner of the city. Large shopping stores not only provide a plethora of products under one roof but also have various sections like entertainments, cinema, food, sport and space for kids. For example, Walmart showcase a myriad of products in a single arena which helps customers to select and purchase products under one roof. Many malls provide a huge amount of discount on many products which is not available in local stores. Another major advantage of shopping malls is parking space, shopping malls are multi-storied buildings and provide ample space for parking vehicles and help in reducing the traffic on the road.
In contrast, replacing small vendors will impact the livelihood of many small shopkeepers and their family, likewise, it will also influence the economy of the country. Beside that malls sell products at astonishing prices which are beyond the middle-class family's reach.
To sum up, as per statements aforementioned, it is safe to say that while replacing small vendors will impact people but with the current market scenario, large shopping malls will replace the local shops soon.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in contrast, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 283.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40989399293 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76447516099 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565371024735 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8457298589 50.4703680194 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.769230769 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7692307692 7.25397266985 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.12807881773 194% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339348222203 0.242375264174 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132710700954 0.0925447433944 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807482519223 0.071462118173 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146738371202 0.151781067708 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140820538 0.0609392437508 231% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 55.0591133005 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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