Many people think that public celebrations (like national holidays, festivals etc.) are a waste of money and that the government should spend those funds in a better way. Do you agree or disagree?
It is a widely held belief that public holidays is crucial for society and state should pour money for that. But there are strong counter arguments by a section of people who think that government has to solve the public problems. I am of the opinion that this matter should be debated in the light of several factors before any conclusion can be drawn.
Firstly, national holidays or festival will create unity a to celebrate everyone part of belongs to that society and which everyone gather in common place and whoever can celebrate it lot. Secondly, nowadays people are mentally suffering lot with the stress due to their official work or personal problems in order to that they are looking for a celebration to overcome from the stress and they are expecting holiday to enjoy with their surroundings. For instance, In Kingdom of Saudi Arabia, people are really working hard with the lot of stress and heavy workload but when Ramadan comes, everyone gather in common areas and who are all sharing their happiness to everyone and they distribute sweets and food to everyone.
On the other hand, most of the countries, people are suffering lot with their basic needs such as food, cloths and accommodation in order to get it. One of the survey which explain to us that still 64% people are in below poverty and who are all not getting benefits from the government. For example, In Australia, there is a biggest celebration happens on Sydney for New Year, they will burst crackers for half an hour which is cost around one Million dollars but one of the survey is saying 20% people who do not have a job and that is really irritating from people against the government
To recapitulate this, government has to take a responsibilities to full-fill people basic needs to make them happy and then they can think about the public celebrations
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Suggestion: a responsibility; responsibilities
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, look, really, second, secondly, so, still, then, as to, for example, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79623824451 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54145183072 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539184952978 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.70297917 49.4020404114 226% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 170.0 106.682146367 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.4444444444 20.7667163134 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.4444444444 7.06120827912 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153107509457 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066049419114 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477824033935 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104027143334 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319123854569 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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