Governments should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military.
Here author is trying to say that government should give a same attention to arts as much as military.Art is very necessary for any nation,because art is the thing which makes nation notable all around the world,so paying attention to arts is very good idea,but on the cost of military investment is not quite good practice.Military plays a vital role in safety of country so if the country it self is not safe then there is no meaning to preserve art,so according to me country should pay attention to military first and after that still they have a investment left then they should go for art.
First,As I have said earlier military is a very vital part of country so we should invest more in in that with compare to art.War is a very potential issue for any country.Nation should be ready to handle any kind of war crisis because if nation is paying good attention to the military investment then military will be having a powerful base and latest weapons and that will be enough to defend any kind of sudden attack.Instead of military if we are paying much attention to the art and we are keep investing in art and not paying attention to the military then enemies will find it vulnerable and attack the country if there is no country then there is no art so we should first make our country safe.
For the country which are very wealthy and developed then as much as attention is given to military that should also be given to the art.For an example if we take an instance rome is home for many historic art.Rome is world famous for their ancient buildings and museum so if government not paying a proper attention to the art then it may raise the big question for the safety of history's very important art.
Even if country is having a good military base but country is suffering from some major issues like malnutrition,inflation and unemployment then instead of investing in art government should pay attention to this potential problem first.If people of country it self are not happy then there is no meaning for building auditorium hall or opera theatre.
In conclusion I would like to say that both military and art plays a vital role for any nation but one a very first choice country should go for investment in military and then also country should consider art.In short country should prioritise their requirement first.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1930.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 413.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67312348668 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72558144481 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.418886198547 0.4932671777 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 614.7 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 82.0 23.0359550562 356% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 160.354108148 60.3974514979 265% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 386.0 118.986275619 324% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 82.6 23.4991977007 352% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.2 5.21951772744 291% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 7.80617977528 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279982114567 0.243740707755 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.188748789179 0.0831039109588 227% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766154775433 0.0758088955206 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188748789179 0.150359130593 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766154775433 0.0667264976115 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 41.9 14.1392134831 296% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -3.29 48.8420337079 -7% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 34.1 12.1743820225 280% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.99 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.38706741573 117% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 100.480337079 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 11.8971910112 479% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 34.8 11.2143820225 310% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 35.0 11.7820224719 297% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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