Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Has the learning about the past any value for those of us living in the present? People express disparate opinion on this. From my perspective, the past is important for the present in as much as the following reasons.
First, from recalling the past event, we do not do any mistake and this the way of success of any person. For instance, let us take my personal example, when I failed in the bachelor, I reviewed the mistakes that happen in my exam. However, a of myriad people suggested that you must be leaved your major- Science, I gave the exam time to time by recalling the several mistakes and my past experience. At last, after three time, I passed the exam which was a grueling exam for me. In addition, today I do not repeat the same mistakes and the science is easy for me.
Next, some past events are important for the people life that direct the person’s aim. For example, when my sister was suffering from the disease-Maleria, she did not get the better treatment because the lack of the good hospital and health assistance, doctors and nurses. However, the disease was cure up by the local treatment. The deficiency of health staff and lack of the better treatment is so striking in her mind that she decided become the nurse to help the all people.
Further, when we neglect the some event, from the careless we cannot learn anything new. To try to learn some new events in present, we should care the past event. For example, I did not recorded the own past expenditure, that why, I used the lots of money for entertainment and I did not have the interest to learn the anything new. However, when my father gave the detailed record of the money, while I using to study. After that, I realized the past event and today, I am studying hard and leaning some new skills.
In conclusion, we should be remembered the past event in as much as they are beneficial for present and future. There are several reasons to recall the past events but in my opinion the above reason are important.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 242, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...stakes that happen in my exam. However, a of myriad people suggested that you mus...
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Line 3, column 386, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
...y recalling the several mistakes and my past experience. At last, after three time, I passed th...
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Line 7, column 30, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...eople. Further, when we neglect the some event, from the careless we cannot lear...
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Line 7, column 188, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'record'
Suggestion: record
... the past event. For example, I did not recorded the own past expenditure, that why, I u...
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Line 7, column 404, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...the detailed record of the money, while I using to study. After that, I realized ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1656.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 363.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56198347107 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49003203697 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501377410468 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8112384179 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1578947368 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1052631579 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47368421053 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231970060311 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811089883217 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101219584623 0.0737576698707 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147583867614 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0919531166273 0.0645574589148 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.