Some people think that modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Social media plays an important part in our life. Nowadays everyone try to use the information from one place to another with the help of social apps like whatsapp, facebook, instagram and so on. Today one of the pressing concerns the given topic is should people use the; sociable apps or not? Through this essay, I shall explore the dimension and assertions are example from both points of view.
On one side, there are many people who argue that there are many advantages to become a more sociable. They strength the view point claming that more activeness because in the modern era everyone use the various type of techonology to enterian the time and many compnies use the techonology for business purpose. For instance, nowadays everyone use the electronic things to share the information from one place to another. They think that this is a better way to communicate with others.
On the other side, there are many people who argue that there are many advantages to become a less sociable. They view point claming that workaholic. In these days many people are busy in our life. They always doing to complete the work on laptop, conputer, mobilephone and so on. They have been enough time to talk with oherts on social media. For example, nowadays many person want to earn high wages and do more work on job to fulfil our dreams. So that why people are less sociable.
As we have seen that, there is no single conclusion. There are number of answer to this question. I am balancing, however, i tend to beleive that its depend from person to person and which thing that they use in our life to spend the time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68181818182 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36074066427 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517482517483 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.9406164929 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.3888888889 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8888888889 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150892837934 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543220714171 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729187639868 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0840069665693 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630643852378 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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