You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have just bought a Walkman from a shop at the airport but found a fault with it after reaching home. Write to the shop for a solution. You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write your own address.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear______.
Dear Sir,
Yesterday late night I was in transit at Singapore Airport traveling from Austrailia to Sri Lanka. While I was at the airport, I bought a black Sony Walkman from your dutyfree shop for 89 SGD. However when I came home found that, the new walkman I bought was not working. I changed the batteries and checked, but no luck. I think it is a factory defect.
In the bill, you provided it is mentioned that for factory defects, it will be a one to one replacement. Since I have never used it, I would prefer a replacement or full money refund. Please do let me know, how can I claim the warranty. The bill number is BN87623 if it helps you to locate the details of the purchase. You can reach me from the address, 213A, Longdon Avenue, Colombo 07, Sri Lanka.
Thank you for your understanding and appreciate a quick response from you.
Yours,
Faithfully,
Nethandun Wijethilaka
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 194, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...man from your dutyfree shop for 89 SGD. However when I came home found that, the new wa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 26.3917525773 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 741.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63125 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62677767188 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6875 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.6231995199 44.8134815571 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.75 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3333333333 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284570875197 0.216113520407 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815664130504 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797448196365 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146424052062 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0936786735307 0.0580467560999 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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