"Do you think consumers should avoid over packed products or it is the responsibility of producers to avoid extra packaging of products?" Give your views or any relevant example with your own experience.
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is the colossal upsurge for the usage of over-packaged products. There is a widespread concern that some people say the consumers should avoid using such products but the proponents argue it is the responsibility of the producers to avoid extra packaging. In my opinion, the second statement outdo the first and merits serious considerations.
There are many arguments in favour of my stance but the most preponderant one lies in the fact that the producers of the product must avoid packing them extra. In fact, not only do over-packaging make consumers bear more cost than actual but also it is very harmful for the degradation of the environment. We can find overwhelming evidence in support of the fact that the government has to bear lot of cost for the disposal of the products used to package the products. Needless to say, all these demerits stand the economy of the customers in bad stead, as far as the harmfulness is concerned.
On the other hand, one detrimental aspect of this argument is that it is also the responsibility of the consumers to avoid such over-packaged products. Besides, if the consumers do not use such things a company will no longer bring them to market. For example, there are a number of researches by various government bodies that show that in Australian Capital Territory of Australia the consumers avoid over packaged and plastic products. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favour of avoiding the products available in the market if they are over-packaged.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the use of the unnecessarily over raped products are indeed too dare to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 124, Rule ID: TOO_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to dare'?
Suggestion: to dare
...essarily over raped products are indeed too dare to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, if, second, so, as to, for example, in fact, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 287.0 242.827586207 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93728222997 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96134451966 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533101045296 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 452.7 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9661279065 50.4703680194 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.083333333 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9166666667 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.25397266985 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27263272705 0.242375264174 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0996454406472 0.0925447433944 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732802695738 0.071462118173 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166392712089 0.151781067708 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047133333681 0.0609392437508 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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