Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to be solved, while others think that individuals cannot solve these environmental problems unless governments make some action.
These days people tend to control environmental problems. Some believe that government should take the responsibility for solving The problems related to the environment while others argue that organization and each individual should take the responsibility for solve environmental problems. I believe that people and organizations should control the pollution.
Firstly, organizations conduct massive camping’s regarding control the pollution. these campings provide awareness to the people about, how the environment is affecting and peoples participation in it. The Australian national university students conducted 500 campings worldwide within one year on control of air pollution and explained different ways to stop controlling the polluted products or things.
secondly, the individual should also take a step regarding the pollution control. government and other private organization can make campings, but rules should be followed by the individual itself. According to the recent survey conducted by the pollution department said: " air pollution is controlled from last one year by people are using the public transport and traffic is reduced". An environment is part of the world each and everyone has a responsibility to save it.
To conclude, as the environment changes affect the people in all ways everyone as a responsibility to control it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Government
...a step regarding the pollution control. government and other private organization can make...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 31.9359605911 66% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 5.75862068966 278% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1182.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 201.0 242.827586207 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.88059701493 5.00649968141 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32452984654 2.71678728327 122% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 139.433497537 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562189054726 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2606047777 50.4703680194 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.454545455 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 7.25397266985 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 6.9802955665 14% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190495892899 0.242375264174 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075858239577 0.0925447433944 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0894514648168 0.071462118173 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113647296294 0.151781067708 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106087657479 0.0609392437508 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 12.6369458128 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 53.1260098522 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.82 11.5310837438 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.0 Out of 90
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