You are getting married soon. Write a letter to your friend from a different country and invite him/her to the wedding. In your letter:•Describe your future wife/husband.•What will happen at the wedding?•Why do you want to invite him/her?

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You are getting married soon. Write a letter to your friend from a different country and invite him/her to the wedding. In your letter:
• Describe your future wife/husband.
• What will happen at the wedding?
• Why do you want to invite him/her?

Dear Trump Obama,

As always, a contented and cheerful person, I know you will be enjoying your life. I feel excited to inform you that my marriage is now fixed for the date jan-2019. My prospective wife name is Shruthi, I met her at my job. She is very dear to me, extremely personable and our tastes also coincide. I feel exuberant and high spirited about our future. And I guarantee that she feels the same way, because I see it on her face.

The wedding ceremony will follow Indian traditions and culture. Am from the southern part of India, and we have a custom in this region, according to it the wedding is celebrated in the bride’s town. So, the groom’s family has to travel to the venue. I know you are always interested to explore foreign traditions, this is a perfect opportunity to look at and listen to priests reciting the verses from holy scriptures. By chance, if you are able to build rapport with the priest, they can explain the meaning of the verses to you as well.

One more highlight of the wedding will be the authentic and delicious Indian food. A famous and reputed local catering service is hired for the cooking arrangements. The food menu is composed of a wide range international and local dishes. Following the marriage, there will be a post wedding ceremony, this is opportunity for the groom’s family to display their hospitality and generosity. At this event, the dances to Indian music is enjoyable and feast to watch. I compel you to arrive at my home town, a month prior at minimum, am inviting all of our college mates, so we can have cherishing experiences and also relive our past moments.

Yours affectionately,
Abhi.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 538, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
...my home town, a month prior at minimum, am inviting all of our college mates, so w...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, then, well, as to, i feel

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 937.175257732 149% => OK
No of words: 294.0 206.0 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75170068027 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7641428049 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 127.690721649 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595238095238 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 290.88556701 152% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 0.824742268041 849% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2128246251 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6111111111 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179839090751 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496940267259 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425922791932 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126076282184 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365141222805 0.0580467560999 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 41.2886597938 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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