Role of Part time job in students life
An issue which frequently generates a great deal of heated debate is regarding the effective learning and is discussed in contemporary world. Many academics contend that skill's and mental development is must in present time. This essay will discuss the complete agreement with this notion and will justify my viewpoints.
To commence with, there are wide range of arguments to support the aforementioned statement; however, most conspicuous one lies in fact is not remote and complicated but accessible and practical. It has long been justified by the proponents to assume that expenditure of educations is now very expensive and not easy for parents to handle. Furthermore, it is asserted that there are some knowledge which you can’t get from colleges and parents but from outer world, hence, when someone works he meets to the new world which provides the different experiences.
Another convincing fact to ascertain is that in western countries like Europe students are independent as they pay their own debt while studying by doing part time or full time job. Besides, it seems incontrovertible that it can help to build confidence, removes our hesitation and improves our communication skills. However, the one who advocates this view point fails to see the picture in large extent. A relevant example is nations worldwide have observed a dramatic shift in the public regarding the topic.
In the view of argument discussed above, it is my considered opinion that students should work on part time basis because it can help parents by reducing financial stress on them and makes you aware to how to live in this society additionally it brings you to next level confidence.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 155, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... their own debt while studying by doing part time or full time job. Besides, it seems inc...
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Line 5, column 168, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...bt while studying by doing part time or full time job. Besides, it seems incontrovertible...
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Line 7, column 99, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ed opinion that students should work on part time basis because it can help parents by re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, regarding, so, while, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 274.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18613138686 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88211426958 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 139.433497537 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664233576642 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1162785121 50.4703680194 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.181818182 104.977214359 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9090909091 20.9669160288 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 7.25397266985 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0598125240692 0.242375264174 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0244368159805 0.0925447433944 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772759972608 0.071462118173 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0388101872183 0.151781067708 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672212161133 0.0609392437508 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 55.0591133005 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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