You have a friend who is about to enter university, and he wants you to advise him on which subject to specialize in – history, in which he is very interested, or computer science, which offers better job prospects.
• You should write at least 150 words.
• You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Dear Misha,
It seems like ages since I’ve heard from you. How is it going? I’m writing to answer your question about entering the Moscow State University. I would like to give some pieces of advice why you should choose STEM subject like computer science instead off humanitarian one like history.
There are several reasons for making such a choice. The major one is that specialists ranging from programmers to AI system engineers are likely to have an opportunity to obtain a job. This is because the market has been rapidly growing since the beginning of the 21st century. Another reason is that employees who work in the computer field have high salaries in comparison with other jobs.
Of course, you can argue that we should make such an important choice listening heart and not mind. But this isn’t really a case. In my experience, had I not become a lawyer, I would have never got an opportunity to buy a new Mercedes E-class, especially when being a philosopher as I wished when I was in school.
Drop me a line when you are free with your final decision. I’m looking to hearing from you.
Best wishes,
Evgeny
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 219, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to stem'
Suggestion: To stem
... pieces of advice why you should choose STEM subject like computer science instead o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, really, so, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 960.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84848484848 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53295794103 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.69696969697 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.790785552 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.5714285714 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1428571429 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.28571428571 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164596522387 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483402452986 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436266353585 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0974368325801 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429865663712 0.0580467560999 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.