Today more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveller?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
These days, the number of travellers have been increased worldwide. There are multiple reasons behind this trend which could be varied from place to place. However, the number of travellers are growing day by day and will be growing in the future.
People usually travel for tourism purposes or professional reasons. However different reasons are working as a mediator in the increment of different types of tours. Firstly, people nowadays have more leisure time and more disposable money in their hands than ever. Therefore, they are now spending a lot for tourism purposes. Moreover, a lot of transportation means are now available which facilitates us to move from one place to another with ease and at a low cost. What is more, a lot of tour operators are now offering numerous attractive holiday packages at competitive prices. Synergistically, all these factors are helping tourism industry to grow.
Secondly, numerous people nowadays have to travel for professional reasons. Most of the companies are now interested to establish their factories in outskirt areas to reduce the operating costs. Therefore, most of the workers have to travel a long distance every day to get to their work stations. Beside these, the Business owners often visit foreign countries as businesses are not now confined within a single country. All these factors are now positively affecting travelling activities.
Travellers get the opportunity to get benefit a lot from travelling activities. While tourists get plethora of opportunities to come across to different cultures and different people that facilitate them to learn new things, the business persons get chance to increase their overseas business. The professionals, who live away from their offices and travel every day to reach their office could be benefited by accessing the modern facilities. Because, had they lived close to their working stations, they would have not gotten the opportunity to access the contemporary urban services that includes vital issues like health and education.
In conclusion, there are different underlying reasons why people travel from one place to another. The reasons for business travel could be varied a great from the reasons behind the amusement tours. Whatever the reason is, the movement of people is increasing day by day.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, as to, in conclusion, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1954.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33879781421 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8209267764 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535519125683 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 624.6 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4357936167 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8181818182 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6363636364 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13636363636 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262228616999 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864375456008 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746842766236 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158256035 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501159936391 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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