In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness or decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of the problems and what measures take to solve.
“Health play a very vital role in our life”.Without health our life become just like as a tissue paper.Similarly, one such issue here is of that, level of weight of individuals is increasing due to that, the average of health and fitness are decreasing in some Nations. Which is also affecting the society. In this essay, I will examine the possible reasons of this trend and suggest some of the proactive measures, that authority's could implement to curb this problem.
To begin with this, the first step is to understand that, why is this happening? There are two three main reasons for behind this, first and foremost, in this modern era, every individual have busy in his work. They have no time for preparing healthy food because it takes too much time rather than junk food that's why, most of the people are preferred to eat junk food because it saves their time therefore, the obesity has increasing day by day in some Nations, which create many frightful situations. Probing ahead, to overcome this problem, they devoting time for doing exercises and go to the ground for running in the morning as well as, evening time. Which makes their body fit and fine and they always live in tremendous lifestyle.
Secondly, the another reason for believing this is that, nowadays, most of the youngsters and children are eating plethora of junk food items such as, Burger, pizza, soft drinks and cold drinks as well as, in the countryside area most of the children and their parents also eat more healthy food like butter, curd, milk, chapatis etc. Which is the main reason for increasing the average of weight in some countries. Furthermore, for reaching consequences, youngsters and children set their own pyramid of food with the help of scientist and they should eat green vegetables more and more. At last, particularly the best epitome of this is that, the recent survey had been conducted by the World Health Organisation (WHO), which illustrates that 5 out of 10 people are unhealthy and unfit in the world only for eating junk food.
To conclude, there are variety of factors that have led to make this problem worth, while, it may not be possible to find a complete solution of this. It could probably be solved by making general public aware about their health and government take initiative to do counselling in the public.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, well, while, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1950.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 401.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86284289277 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61770562875 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556109725686 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.9995253902 49.4020404114 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.285714286 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6428571429 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147412158452 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546558510699 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530732207136 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976400950718 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319248508143 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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