Advertising influence people's behavior in a negative way?
Since the dawn of humanity, searching the best thing has taken the position of biggest position of rest of the others. From that point of view, advertising is the only, which make it easier, based on numerous methodology. Since it has various outcomes, some people are always taking it from an opposite direction while others are considering it as the best to reach the greatest things for instance food, clothe, medicine and so on. But, I for one, advocate for the later one for a quite few reasons, two conspicuous one have been elaborated upon under.
The first justification for, considering advertising as the quickest method to get the suitable and the best thing for anybody. In the contemporary world, there is likely to choose a bad essential thing, because of the rapid growth of industrialization as well as competition. My Sister is a great example of this. After her first child born, she was getting sensitive in every product to choose for the baby. That time there was so many advisements appeared on the Television. Besides that, she used to search on the numerous websites, which were actually really good to showcase baby product with little description. By using that information, It was quite easier for him to compare the products according to their traits. That time it really had a great impact on her.
On top of that, to become a developed country, there is no way unless we become good at industrialization. And to become a well-reputed industrialized nation, the advertisement is the only way to reach people easily. I can give an example from my own experience. A decade back from now, the company who was the most popular in the medical sector in my country, suddenly made their aim to reach the global market. Making that happened they forgot the best theme that "Time and Tide Wait for None". That time they barely found in the advertisement. Factor comes as a consequence that, they started to lose their popularity day after day. And they are becoming a usual company now though rich in quality. It all happens just due to a lack of proper advertisement.
To wrap it up, due to the aforementioned ground, I can say with a little doubt that, making people more concern and developing a developed nation advertising is very worthful.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 77, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the biggest'.
Suggestion: of the biggest
...g the best thing has taken the position of biggest position of rest of the others. From th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, but, first, if, really, so, well, while, for instance, as well as, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1897.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 390.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8641025641 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89716472523 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566666666667 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.8638247759 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2272727273 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7272727273 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105666773869 0.236089414692 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0278672368566 0.076458572812 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511028671651 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0651989915842 0.150856017488 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374167254053 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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