Discipline is an ever increasing problem in modern schools. Some people think that discipline should be the responsibilities of teachers, while others think this is the role of parents. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Nowadays, children behavior is one of the most major concerns of today schools. As the present day is the age of contradictions of views, some people argue that inculcation good morals in a child are falling within the teacher duty, while other portion put this liability onto parents shoulders. Whilst both point of views continue to exist, I strongly believe that the main reason for the good manners in children is a mandatory deed for parents. However, I don’t think that the teacher has a peripheral duty on this either.
First and foremost, people who think that parents are definitely responsible for the child ethics and values because every child learns their first word from their parents. In other words, before getting admitted into the education children learn about the positives and the negatives aspects of their life through their parents. For instance, an unhealthy family environment can cause an indiscipline life for a child in terms of health. Accordingly, the kid's lifestyle affected by the prevailing habits which been inculcated by parents.
However, some people argue that school has a vital role to play in children behavior, where the tutor has the ability to affect the student more than parents. In other words, the majority of teenagers used to take their teacher as a role model. Accordingly, they can earn their good or bad manners from him and strongly affected by the school atmospheric in general. Even in university good doctors and tutors have many students to follow their steps in their own life.
To conclude, by seeing both sides of the spectrum, it's clarity evidence that both parents and tutors playing a vital role in juveniles behaviors, ethics, and awareness. However, I tend to that parents attribute more responsibility
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 457, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'kids'' or 'kid's'?
Suggestion: kids'; kid's
...ld in terms of health. Accordingly, the kids lifestyle affected by the prevailing ha...
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Line 6, column 231, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at parents attribute more responsibility
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, however, if, so, while, for instance, in general, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12714776632 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63915288507 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563573883162 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.137239464 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.571428571 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166965945241 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549991544703 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341938859301 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0996186970262 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025982500707 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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