The bar chart shows a survey of a group of young professional aged 20-30 years who were asked to state which factors motivated them to succeed.
The chart gives information on motivation factors in different factors between the age group of 20-30 years to success that obtained from a survey. Overall, factors motivations between mentioned ages have high percentages; expect three items with about 30%.
As can see, personal satisfaction with 80 percent, and similarly ambition factor with same proportion (80%), and after that family pressure, pressure from society with 70% and 60% respectively located in other parts of the chart from point of percentage.
While rivalry and desire for the material thing with same proportion (50%) located in the other parts. However, peer pressure, money with about 45%, feeling inadequate, and envy/jealousy factors are devoted 30% to themselves. The least proportion among these factors with about 28 percent was related to fear of failure.
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- Currently, there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst may be dangerous. To what extent do you agree with this statement? 61
- Some people say that the government should stop TV and newspaper from showing crimes because media coverage of violent crimes is frightening people and encouraging criminals Do you agree or disagree 43
- the bar chart below shows the results of a poll of theater goers on what disturbs them during performances at the theatre 67
- The bar chart shows a survey of a group of young professional aged 20 30 years who were asked to state which factors motivated them to succeed 91
- Some people believe that robots will play an important role in future societies while other argue that robots might have negative effects on society Discuss both views and give your opinion 87
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, similarly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 707.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 129.0 196.424390244 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48062015504 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.37013600491 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70756895233 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.697674418605 0.547539520022 127% => OK
syllable_count: 208.8 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0853235381 43.030603864 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.833333333 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176978758599 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103046411646 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119723508758 0.0843802449381 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132583258991 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126995910177 0.0819641961636 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 11.4140731707 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.