Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Friends are of utmost importance in our lives, without them life becomes boring and bland. But is it important to keep the old friends or is it better to make new friends? Some people prefer to remain in touch with their old friends because they think they are more close to them. However, I believe that benefits of making new friends far outweigh any negative repercussions.
First of all, friends are significant to us at every stage of our life, and not only during the childhood days or school and college days. As we grow up and move forward towards the new phases of life, we make new friends as the old friends can not with us life long. For instance, when I started my first job, two of my colleges were really good friends of mine. They helped me in myriad of ways during my initial days as they were the times of great struggles for me. I was once assigned a project that was not related to my field of work. I was in so much tension as I have to complete it before the timeline. In such drastic situation, this friend of mine helped me by spending extra hours from the job to help me in the project. Thus, I was able to finish my project on time, which was not possible without my friend's unconditional helpI.staying late in the.
Secondly, new friends provides new experiences. When we come in contact with assortment of people then only we become able to recognize the nature of people. There are various kinds of people in the world sometimes bad ones sometimes good ones. As a result we become able to distinguish between the right person or the wrong person for us. Hence, we can choose the true friends for us and not the fake ones who are just friends for party, outing etc. When I made new friends during my job life, I had many wonderful experiences with my friends, yet some bitter experiences which led me a lesson for life. Therefore, new friends helps us in gaining different experiences.
Finally, as every coin has two sides, we can say that there are some people who might be of the opinion that it is always better to have old friends because they think they have spent a lot of time with them so they understand them better and can help them in better way then new friends. On the other hand, from my perspective making new friends is far more essential in todays competitive and modern world, in which at every stage who need your friends to show the right direction.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that making new friends is tremendously essential to move forward in the journey of life as well as to experience the life in real and fun filled way.
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- TPO-11 - Integrated Writing Task 80
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- TPO - 48 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 860, Rule ID: THE_SENT_END[1]
Message: Did you forget something after 'the'?
...nds unconditional helpI.staying late in the. Secondly, new friends provides new e...
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Line 5, column 49, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
..., new friends provides new experiences. When we come in contact with assortment of p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, hence, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, as to, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2122.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 475.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46736842105 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66845742379 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41602590289 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475789473684 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 650.7 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5587805445 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4545454545 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5909090909 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72727272727 5.45110844103 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205951756056 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735106885009 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727672821631 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131129536627 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553893735352 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.