A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him/her on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
Thank him/her for the invitation.
Explain why you cannot come
Ask him about other times to visit.
You need to write at least 150 words.
Begin your letter with
Dear...
Dear Mark,
I'm writing to let you know about holidays that we had planned. I won't be able to come to your mother land as I have an important work in my office to take care of.
First of all, thank you so much for inviting me in your country for holidays. I know, we had planned this holiday since long and you had organised every details of trip. Trust me even I'm excited for this trip as much as you are but I'm sorry, I can't come.
As you know I have recently changed my job and I was not aware about my role in new organisation so I thought, It will be convenient for me to visit your place. However, the workload in current profile suddenly increased as my company is awarded with new project which is to be completed over the coming holidays. My supervisor requested me to cancel my holidays as this work is very much significant for organisations growth and it will also boost my career hence, I have to cancel my vacation.
Although, I can't accept your invitation for this holidays I have a good news, I can visit your place during Christmas holidays. Let me know your availability during Christmas, I would love to see you.
Hope you will understand. I look forward to hearing from you so that I can book my tickets accordingly.
Best wishes,
Steve
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Mark, Im writing to let you know about holidays ...
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Line 5, column 185, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ed every details of trip. Trust me even Im excited for this trip as much as you ar...
^^
Line 5, column 233, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ed for this trip as much as you are but Im sorry, I cant come. As you know I ha...
^^
Line 5, column 245, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...trip as much as you are but Im sorry, I cant come. As you know I have recently ch...
^^^^
Line 9, column 13, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... to cancel my vacation. Although, I cant accept your invitation for this holiday...
^^^^
Line 9, column 45, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ough, I cant accept your invitation for this holidays I have a good news, I can visi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, hence, however, if, look, so, you know, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 32.9175257732 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1041.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42978723404 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54580491789 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574468085106 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 327.6 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6304875255 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0769230769 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0769230769 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 4.34317383033 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234687315917 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975644396049 0.0766984524023 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611754938771 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151959278152 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540003842097 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.