You recently spent a vaction at the home of some friends who live in a different city.
Write a letter to your friends. In your letter,
Thank your friends for letting you stay with them
Describe some things you enjoyed about your vacation
Invite your friends to visit you.
Hi friends,
I hope this letter finds you in best of your health and spirit. I am really thankful to you all for allowing me to stay with you when I was there for vacation.
It was a great time spend with you all. Lots of joyful moment we sped together, specially when we went to the Agra to visit ‘The Taj Mahal’ . It was a great place and another one is “India Gate”. The food is also good in delhi. The most I like is ‘ Aloo Paratha’. I did not enjoyed all this things without you guys.
Now it’s my turn to return the favor. I invite you all to please come and visit my town. My parents ill also feel happy to see you all. Here is also some exciting places are there to visit. So do come and spend time with me.
Again thank you for making my vacation more memorable.
Hope to here from you soon.
Your’s friend,
Trupti.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 25, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hi friends, I hope this letter finds you in best of your health and spirit. I...
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Line 5, column 150, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... Agra to visit 'The Taj Mahal' . It was a great place and another one is...
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Line 5, column 305, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'enjoy'
Suggestion: enjoy
...is ' Aloo Paratha'. I did not enjoyed all this things without you guys. No...
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Line 5, column 317, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...oo Paratha'. I did not enjoyed all this things without you guys. Now it&apos...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 722.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40243902439 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34196749634 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646341463415 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.040724815 44.8134815571 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 45.125 76.5299724578 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.25 16.8248392259 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 4.34317383033 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 7.41237113402 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252499862414 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865198223095 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0921691598917 0.0603063233224 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129919386346 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0910693390888 0.0580467560999 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.4 8.37731958763 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.71 70.7449484536 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.7 7.45979381443 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.76 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.54 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.