The prevention of health problems and illness is more important than treatment and medicine. Government funding should reflect this.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, it appears that the spread of diseases rate is increasing at an alarming which aggravating day after day. In this sense, the government duties not only limited to support the medical projects, or ensuring medication for every citizen, it also extends to dedicating a specific budget for the preventive measures as well. I completely agree with this perspective and strongly believe that precaution is better than cure.
First and foremost, there Is no denial that a large majority of citizens are completely unconscious of the root causes and symptoms of most common maladies. To illustrate, obesity is the major cause of many illnesses such as diabetes, heart diseases, and hypertension. In other words, awareness programs playing a pivotal role in the overall public health. Accordingly, spending more money for the sake of the resident's awareness could be able to eliminate a variety of health issues.
Furthermore, the mere act of bad habits such as smoking, drinking alcohol, fast food, and the lack of practice; has become a phenomenon which extremely aggravates every day among our modern society. For instance, the recent years have witnessed a steady rise in the number of restaurants and food stores, more food poisoning cases are recorded in hospitals. Consequently, the government should pay more attention to the preventive measures like food censoring.
To conclude, in my opinion, the government should allocate a good fund for raising the citizen's awareness against the major reasons of the most common diseases and show them the symptoms of each disease individually, and guide people to live a healthy life either.
- With an increasing population communicating via the internet and text messaging, face to face communication will become a thing of the past.To what extent do you agree? 78
- The prevention of health problems and illness is more important than treatment and medicine. Government funding should reflect this.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
- With an increasing population communicating via the internet and text messaging, face to face communication will become a thing of the past.To what extent do you agree? 95
- Some employers want to be able to contact their stuff any time, even on holidays.Does this development have more advantages than disadvantages? 89
- Discipline is an ever increasing problem in modern schools. Some people think that discipline should be the responsibilities of teachers, while others think this is the role of parents. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 411, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'residents'' or 'resident's'?
Suggestion: residents'; resident's
...spending more money for the sake of the residents awareness could be able to eliminate a ...
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Line 8, column 88, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'citizens'' or 'citizen's'?
Suggestion: citizens'; citizen's
...ld allocate a good fund for raising the citizens awareness against the major reasons of ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, consequently, first, furthermore, if, so, well, for instance, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31297709924 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86752755768 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652671755725 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5816361782 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.545454545 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8181818182 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8181818182 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139084296871 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502506304588 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465379119714 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0735142486235 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0147375167078 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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