Some psychologists think that the best way to overcome the stress of everyday life is to spend a portion of the day doing absolutely nothing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this day and age, Most of the people are living stressful life due to daily conundrums and hectic schedules. The exemplary way to alleviate stress is to do nothing suggested by some experts. However, I oppose to this statement. This essay will discuss why I completely disagree with the aforementioned notion.
The first and the foremost, Stress always advance in gloomy and deteriorated thoughts and it results in surge if mind is left freely during this time. There is a famous saying "Empty mind is a ghost house". Stress normally whipped into toxic thoughts and cause plethora of detrimental effects on the body. For instance, many people found mentally upset amid by this negative thoughts and not meddling in between them in their leisure times. Mental stability is momentous factor in everyone's life and to maintain one should understand how to deal with this hectic situation.
In addition to this, People who do nothing in their stress period will results in causing themself harmful disease e.g. illness, heart disease, obesity and so on. Stress is a pervasive situation and blooming in this unpragmatic condition without doing nothing will first result into unwind mind and them physical problems. To illustrate, many students found highly targets by preventable disease of obession. With little movement and littering our energy after relaxing from daily tight schedule is a lucrative way to nurturing own's health.
To recapitulate, this essay discussed both the mental and physical problems of doing nothing in stress period. In my opinion, I completely disagree with the idea of doing nothing in hectic days.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 29, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put before the verb 'Stress'.
Suggestion: Always Stress
... notion. The first and the foremost, Stress always advance in gloomy and deteriorated thou...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 72, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'result'
Suggestion: result
... do nothing in their stress period will results in causing themself harmful disease e.g...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
e.g., first, however, if, so, for instance, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25475285171 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70297547557 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600760456274 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4210232615 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1333333333 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5333333333 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150301899623 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551356711958 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573474108572 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109744876329 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518477008313 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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