Some psychologists think that the best way to overcome stress of everyday life is to spend a portion of the day doing absolutely nothing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Encouraging our body with a bit of relaxation counts on the completion of the tasks in higher altitude of success. Few psychologists propose that filling a slice of a day doing perfectly nothing is a supreme way to defeat our stress of daily routine. However the above mentioned idea work for some extent and appears partly correct. I will explain why in this essay.
Firstly, in accordance with the experiences of people, when they got to be work less, they are unable to avoid thinking about the sources of stress. This is because, people are getting enough time to think about their stress pointers. One more major drawback of sitting idle is, if they got a good opportunity to prove themselves and sitting doing nothing can miss a chance of success. Although there are lot of reasons for stress, overcoming them is easier than the past and we need to thank the technological improvements.
It is true that tiredness would be the primary source of stress and people should get relaxed in a portion of a day to refresh and regain energy to focus on their daily goals. Despite this, life is like a competition these days. If people miss their opportunities because of tiredness, they will miss chances of improvement.
To conclude, this method of reducing stress may not be effective. In my point of view it could not help people not only in getting opportunities but also in overcoming stress of everyday life.
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- Some believe that modern technology has made people less socially active while others disagree Discuss both views and give your own opinion 65
- Scientists have been warning for many years already that in order to protect the environment people should use less energy. However, most people do not change their ways of living. What is causing this behaviour? How can people be encouraged to change? 61
- School teachers are more responsible for social and intellectual development of students than parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 252, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... to defeat our stress of daily routine. However the above mentioned idea work for some ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1185.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83673469388 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70849466622 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612244897959 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0208490791 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1538461538 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8461538462 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53846153846 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192579837959 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588124905545 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507204757391 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110172852939 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283900362766 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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