Some people believe that preserving natural environment is crucial. However, most make no effort to do so. Why do you think this is happening? What are some simple actions that could help the environment?
It is irrefutable that environmental damage is occurring at a very fast pace and people
know that it is a global priority today to save the environment. However, when it comes to
doing something, no one steps forward. In this essay I intend to delve into the causes of
this phenomenon and suggest simple measures which can be taken at the individual level.
There are many reasons behind the indifferent attitude of people. The main reason is that
we people don’t know that we are also the cause of environmental damage. We don’t
realise that global warming is the result of billions of decisions. We are cutting down trees
for our needs; we are using too many luxuries in the home; we are driving too many cars
and we are wasting resources like fresh water. If only awareness is brought about these
things then many people would take a step forward in this direction.
People are also not doing anything because they think that it is a global problem and only
government action can solve it. What has to be made clear is that small measure taken at
the individual level will take mammoth dimensions when mounted up. For example, in a
country like India with a population of more than one billion, if each person plants a tree
and nurtures it for the first few months, the result would be un-imaginable. We can all
take simple steps like recycling things such as newspapers, plastics and glass. We could
also walk for short distances instead of using our vehicles and for long distances we could
use the public transport.
Another reason why people do little about the environment is that people have become
very busy in their pursuit of wealth and fame that they have no time to think about the
environment. What they don’t realise that if nothing is done today, it might be too late
tomorrow. The rate at which global warming is occurring would soon transform the Earth
into a boiling pot and it would be un-inhabitable for us one day.
To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that the onus of saving the environment is not
just on the shoulders of the governments and big industries. We all must come forward
and do our bit to save the environment before it is too late. It has rightly been said –“little
drops of water, little grains of sand, make the mighty ocean and the vast land”
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 48, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...are wasting resources like fresh water. If only awareness is brought about these ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, then, as to, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1962.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 412.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76213592233 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59452736543 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519417475728 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 601.2 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9524154583 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.263157895 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6842105263 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.31578947368 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 27.0 4.38176352705 616% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144382733217 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046371412456 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508408371232 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0391904310374 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507550016452 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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