Some people say that it is good to have a uniform for all the employees at work. Do you agree or not ?
Their is an opinion that employers should ensure all the stuff with specially designed outfit. I am concerned that dress code policy is an integral part of working life because by the appearance of workers people will make first impression and judge all the company looking at them. However, it has some drawbacks too and sometimes it is even unnecessary to wear an uniform.
First of all, if something looks attractive, it will encourage people to buy it or at least to think and keep in my mind memories. Their is the same situation in working life, where there are many rivals and high competition among many companies, which works in one area. Actually, especially for people who works face-to-face with clients, it is integral to look attractively. Consequently, customers would trust more for people who are dressed in a smart and professional manner. I mean that being presentable enough would increase guests level and enhance reliance, so that ,for example, they will come to the same company for several times, instead of changing due to law level of trust.
Secondly, there are several types of work, where people works with radioactive and chemical substances, which is really hazardous. If they did not wear an uniform, which plays protective role in such case, they would probably get injured. For example, during working with explosive material if it makes contact with the skin, it can burn, ruin or make even more critical bodily harm.
But on the other hand, famous companies as Google or Facebook are well known for their free dress code. Informal environment between is there main aim. It is true that for someone it is superfluous to wear special clothing. Take for example, an office worker spends all the day sitting at a computer or own closed cubicle. Thus whatever he/she wear, man it be formal to casual, no-one will see.
In conclusion, I believe that an uniform has an impact on peoples trustworthiness, subsequently wearing it when necessary would be great not only for employers, but also to stuff to as it builds strong connection in teamwork. Moreover, it hides the economic and social differences between members.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1796.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98888888889 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68808527936 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613888888889 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.185508604 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7777777778 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2222222222 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223111171163 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660600252949 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041220469388 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121260033321 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350883661813 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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