Nowadays, Medical research projects are funded in order to improve medicine and treatment. To help producing effective medication in order to improve health and tackle with variuos disease, in your opinion, do you think that research should be carried by private companies, indviduals or government?
It is obvious that the quality of human health plays an important role in the development of each country. Personally, I firmly believe that both organizations (including non- government organizations and governments) and individuals have to take responsibility of citizens health, although the health is determined by individuals.
In term of individuals, their reports about healthy situations are very necessary with the science to research medication. Because no one can understand your health better than you so the pharmacist can gain amounts of knowledge by gathering those results and then finding the solution for various diseases. Besides, it will have more effective medication when people share their home remedies so as to help each other. For example, some families in Vietnam use parts of plant as leafs, roots for medicine purposes. This amazing method cured many people of diabetes which was not cured easily by western medicine. Thus, the report of science can take full advantage of individuals experience in medication to improve health and tackle with various diseases.
In term of organizations, they have a right to define the all embracing duty and concrete jobs like correcting politics and budgets for treatment research projects. With all of this power, they can provide more facilities and bring waves into line with the cost living to attract the talent scientists so as to research. As a result, we will get the great achievement in medication if those organizations investigate to right medical science projects.
To sum up, the way to improve citizens health in a country is combination of individuals and government. Thus, I suppose that each person should shares their experiences, while the government should ensure proper facilities to make it easier.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: gain
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'take'
Suggestion: take
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...living to attract the talent scientists so as to research. As a results, we will get the...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a result' or simply 'results'?
Suggestion: a result; results
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, then, thus, while, as to, for example, i suppose, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3865248227 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9700841451 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613475177305 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9840530097 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.846153846 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199409518701 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635280549263 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417502835053 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103310052403 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440007619744 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.