The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Young people are one of the most important foundations on which a society stands. It is not completely difficult to notice a myriad of views regarding this subject. They are indeed a very precious generation in a society and in order to motivate them in a right way, it is indeed important to guide them through the right direction by instilling in them a sense of cooperation.
To maintain the social probity, it is very important to understand the mind of the young people and correctly lead them towards the future so that they can follow the tradition of moral integrity. A society is based upon its culture and if the right culture can be implemented in the young generation, the future of the society will be in the right hand. It is very essential to prepare them for the future so that they can lead the society towards its pinnacle.
To instill the sense of righteousness, the implementation of leadership is essential. A person will be a true leader when he/she will not only show other people how to advance but also he/she will do it along with everyone. That is the true leadership each and every young people should subsume in them. To perform the true evaluation of the effectiveness of a true leader, it is essential to look for the ability of the leader to cooperate. Through cooperation, a leader can show his/her followers what are the rudimentary elements that will be needed to advance this society so that the integrity is passed successfully through the next generation and the moral values of a society remain unperturbed.
Business, government, industry and other fields are the building blocks of a society and it is there where the leadership of young people will be one of the most essential parts to make the society go forward. In business, the role of a manager, CEO, advisory board etc. should have the ability to guide their company move forward. In government, the members also must have the same qualities to progress the nation towards advancement. To maintain an integral status of a society as a whole is indeed very important to have the ability to lead.
Considering the above arguments and examples, it is not difficult to accept that leadership and not competition is needed in the young generation. Competition only exacerbates the situation and will not serve the original purpose. To prepare the young people for the future of society, leadership should be instilled in young people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 252, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a right way" with adverb for "right"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...a society and in order to motivate them in a right way, it is indeed important to guide them t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, regarding, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2024.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 417.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85371702638 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81430985981 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.412470023981 0.4932671777 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 648.0 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.801537921 60.3974514979 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.526315789 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9473684211 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.15789473684 5.21951772744 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351092403527 0.243740707755 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101050809168 0.0831039109588 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0924416870935 0.0758088955206 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186358345096 0.150359130593 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.021797363783 0.0667264976115 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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