Essay topics: You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
Describe the training course you want to do
Explain what the company could do to help you
Say how the course will be useful for your job
Dear Sir,
I am writing to apprise you about a training course on Data Science. The day before, I had seen a brochure of Udacity group of this two week beginner's course.
The trail will be going to start from 1st august in Pune. I want our company to join me this tack. This journey will help me to explore new areas of blooming in technical field as well as provide me a lucrative way to keep a surge in my flourishing career. So, I need two weeks exempt from my job responsibilities to advance for it.
As you know, The Udacity Group boasts a high standard of technical knowledge, that's why I do not want to miss this chance. Moreover, afterwards, with combined efforts it will alleviate our chores in our on-going projects.
I hope you consider my postulation to get me well-versed in this course. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Kind regards,
Vinod Chauhan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 79, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...a high standard of technical knowledge, thats why I do not want to miss this chance. ...
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Line 6, column 204, Rule ID: ON-GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
...rts it will alleviate our chores in our on-going projects. I hope you consider my pos...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, moreover, so, well, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 728.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5786163522 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67223815741 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3042697213 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.1818181818 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4545454545 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14920236074 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543244374872 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419655999499 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0910994107426 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235257101547 0.0580467560999 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.69 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.