Due to industrialization, many people migrated to developed countries. This affected lifestyle and increased problems in developed countries. What is your opinion?
These days, it has became a growing trend to see many people migrating to developed countries due to industrialization, and this affected lifestyle and increased problems in those countries . As such, there are both merits and demerits to this trend, although I am of the opinion that the former outdo the latter.
There are a myriad of arguments in favour of my stance. The most conspicuous one is that by accepting migrated people, developed countries can deal with the shortage of the human resource, both unskilled and skilled employees. Not only can those countries secure their labour market, but they can also expend domestic commercial market. Needless to say, all these upsides stand developed countries in good stead when it comes to approving suitable migrated policy.
Another pivotal aspect of is that, by receiving new labour force from abroad, developed countries have many opportunities for setting up good relationship with mother countries of the migrants thank to them. The primary one stem from the fact that migrants will connect with their mother countries in some aspects such as business,... and this will lead to the connection between the two countries. Last but not least, migrants from different countries will help developed countries have a diverse culture . Hence, it is apparent why many are in favour of migrated policy of developed countries.
In the view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits of migrated people to developed countries are too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 246.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23577235772 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75720369513 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577235772358 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.992283289 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.333333333 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 7.25397266985 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289834445884 0.242375264174 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110896227598 0.0925447433944 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114890962143 0.071462118173 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181746441855 0.151781067708 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0997017593583 0.0609392437508 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 82.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 74.5 Out of 90
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