Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat.
Write a letter to your neighbors. In your letter
Explain the reasons for the noise
Apologize
describe what action you will take
Dear sir/Madam,
I have received your letter recently. I apologize for the inconvenience caused as part of my house renovation work.
My first daughter's wedding got fixed in the next month ending. We are renovating our house by changing the cupboards, ceiling and some other outer parts of the house. The carpenters making some noise to prepare the wardrobes and to plug kitchen parts.
I am very sorry for the things which causing very disturbance to you. I would ask my workers to complete major part of the work at their work place and get then manufactured part to the house by ready. I will request them to finish the as soon as possible. If there is any damage happened to your house, please do let me know the things. I will arrange some servant to clean your house premises daily when the work got completed and make sure there will not be any damage.
Thank you so much for bearing in all these days. It would be so great full, if you can help me for few more days to fix the issue.
Yours sincerely,
Josh Robert.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 202, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...anufactured part to the house by ready. I will request them to finish the as soon...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 844.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48936170213 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35836931793 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670212765957 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4947593379 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.9230769231 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4615384615 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.46153846154 4.34317383033 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234249465542 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798139651129 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063958110391 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126544163026 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703845320332 0.0580467560999 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.17 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.