As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Technology has been developing rapidly in a short period of time and has been a great assistance for life of human beings in every aspect of life. With each passing day, more number of people are being introduced to the new advancements and are relying on the gadgets even for the mundane tasks. Though, it seems a great deal of help to make life easier on the surface, it also has a very dangerous side effect to it , one where human logic and thinking capability takes a backseat as all the tasks are efficiently analysed and completed by the gadgets.
Prior to the invention of machines and computers, all the work was laborious and tiring. But, with the introduction of technology, the important tasks needing much accuracy were first replaced by the machinery which later expanded to even the trivial things. In the present world, many jobs like an assistant or a maid which were in a high demand few years ago have been replaced by the machine counterparts who do an excellent job without any nagging. With the technology like machine learning and artificial intelligence invading every aspect of life including our homes, we are just one click away from getting our task done. And with so much technology available, we hardly out to stress our brain and work out our memory cells. This intrusion in our day to day has left us lazy and incapable of taking a practical decision if any situation arises per se. Today, no one feels the need to actually go to a library and spends hours together to research on a subject when internet can give you the same information anywhere with just a click. The calculators, notepads, alarms all take away the human brains work in a subtle way without us even realizing it.
Surely, with every other invention, we are responsible as to how exactly can the product be exploited. We can either make use of the technology so much so that we are absolutely incapable of functioning without one or use it to actually sharpen our mind and be a recipient of loads of knowledge. It is on us to decide which way to go.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 51, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... has been developing rapidly in a short period of time and has been a great assistance for lif...
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Line 1, column 417, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...o has a very dangerous side effect to it , one where human logic and thinking capa...
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Line 2, column 1116, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a subtle way" with adverb for "subtle"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...rms all take away the human brains work in a subtle way without us even realizing it. Surely, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1689.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 365.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62739726027 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6374556254 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569863013699 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1555764349 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.642857143 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0714285714 23.4991977007 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92857142857 5.21951772744 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0904767244937 0.243740707755 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0300610429642 0.0831039109588 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476227696392 0.0758088955206 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0711262749186 0.150359130593 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715968073689 0.0667264976115 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.1392134831 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.8420337079 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.