Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.
Why do you think this is happening?
what can government do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?
In today's world, we are facing major issues with the dirt that is produced by each and every human being in a direct or indirect way. From my point of view, to deal with day to day activities we are depending on the latest developed technology which producing more waste.
To begin with, in olden days, people uses all natural things to survive their lives. For an example, to carry any baggage they never used plastic bags. If they required to use any covers they always prefer reusable bags. On the other hand, nowadays without plastic we can not think our life.
Moreover, all industries producing the waste in the form of chemicals and solids. The generated plastic and chemicals will take such a long time to dilute in the earth. Many researches proved that they will take many years to mix. For instance, this is the main cause of pollution and global warming proven by many scientists.
According to me, The government has to take certain action on the production of garbage. they should strictly ban the usage of hazardous things like plastic, fiber etc. The political leaders need to make an agreement with the plants that, they should take proper actions to reduce the waste. Government has to create awareness in the people how the garbage will effect the environment. Some plans has to be taken to recycle the waste and that can not become harmful.
Finally, it is every individual responsibility to take action on preventing the production of rubbish by using the items that are given by nature to carry our lives which can easily mix with mud.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 196, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
..., to deal with day to day activities we are depending on the latest developed technology whic...
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Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...y baggage they never used plastic bags. If they required to use any covers they al...
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Line 3, column 170, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'using'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: using
...ver used plastic bags. If they required to use any covers they always prefer reusable ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...l warming proven by many scientists. According to me, The government has to take certain act...
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Line 7, column 90, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...in action on the production of garbage. they should strictly ban the usage of hazard...
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Line 7, column 217, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...itical leaders need to make an agreement with the plants that, they should take p...
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Line 7, column 364, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...ness in the people how the garbage will effect the environment. Some plans has to be t...
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Line 7, column 399, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'have', 'haven'.
Suggestion: have; haven
...will effect the environment. Some plans has to be taken to recycle the waste and th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, moreover, so, as to, for instance, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77205882353 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39302936314 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602941176471 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.775395538 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.125 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13562469607 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387919696199 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423146471149 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0680639963625 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334224956644 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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