What are the advantages and disadvantages of having an older lovers?
These days, It is easier for people to have lovers thanks to a developed technology. Loving an older person has been a common kind of love in recent year. In this essay, I will figure out both advantages and disadvantages of having an older lover and try to draw some conclusions.
Many people think that one of positive sides of loving an older person is broadening our minds. It is true that an older person has more knowledge and experience in working, especially in life because we may be given some good and helpful advices when we are in need. And we also get a lot of lessons about communicating, earning and saving money, etc from them. Therefore, If we love an older person, we may gain more experiences thanks to advices or lessons.
On the contrary, there are also negative sides in being in love with older person. Having an older lover, we might be given the run-around. For instance, when we are in an argument situation, we may be a loser due to their experience and good convincement. Moreover, If older men sometimes want to get married sooner than we want, we will not have a good preparation for our spiritual life owing to our lack of life experiences.
In summary, There are both pros and cons of loving an older person. I personally think that we should have an older lover to live a valuable and colorful life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, in summary, kind of, it is true, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1104.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58091286307 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62617251532 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539419087137 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7021135724 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.9230769231 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5384615385 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329748113971 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149307403591 0.084324248473 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115171178624 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253835992536 0.151304729494 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110981363181 0.056905535591 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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