Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic.
What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
With the inception of tourism industry, remote areas with harsh conditions are getting explored and now-a-days more and more people are heading towards such destinations. This new trend has plethora of effects on individuals and society in both the means. Such places can provide experiences to the tourist which are worth remembering their whole life and on the bitter side, these can become a cause of their death. In the essays, both the notions of pros and cons of unexplored areas are discussed.
Admittedly, Human life is all about gaining different experiences and remote areas are the best in providing them. Further more, relation between people get stronger whenever they visit such places as their dependancy on each other increases and eventually, their bond get stronger. For an instance, Bear Grills find his life partner during mountaineering Mount Everest as they trust each other during journey. Even the less, tourist can learn different culture which they may use in their hometown and can ease their lives.
Since technology is not advanced at such areas and conditions can change and become severe without any warning. Sand storms in Sahara deserts is major reason of death of thousands tourists visiting in past 5 years. In these areas, there are high chances of getting lost and once a person is lost, it is difficult to find him again. Apart from that, wild life is also very dangerous in remote areas and animals can attack leading to the death.
Weighing all the notions, unexplored areas have benefits and cons. Anyone visiting such places should study the conditions and must undergo proper training before visiting so that he/she can come back alive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09747292419 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43780966792 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620938628159 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3836858749 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.857142857 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.07142857143 7.06120827912 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253314472092 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730459208697 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738257153294 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154653854279 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305808940887 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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