You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter
Describe the item
Explain where and when you left it
Say what action you would like the company to take
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Divya Garapati, writing this letter to you with regard to an item which was lost in the Hyderabad express on June 30 Coach Number S8 and Seat Number 45.
I lost my laptop on the train when i was returning to Hyderabad. The model of the laptop is DELL E5480 latest version.My identity card was pasted on back side of the laptop and kept in a blue color leather bag. The laptop was black in color and i recently bought it for my personal use. I was very expensive and so many important documents were there in my PC.
I was coming from my hometown with heavy luggage. I kept my laptop bag on the upper birth. In the morning when i woke the train reached to station. In a hurry, i forgot the bag on the same seat and came out from the train. It was the last station where i get down from compartment. By that time when i am leaving there were no passengers left in the train.
It would be so grateful, if you can check with the railway team who will clean the train after last station so that, it may help to get any information. Can you please do let me know in case of any data that you received from your employees.
I am looking forward for your response.
Yours faithfully,
Divya Garapati.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 36, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
.... I lost my laptop on the train when i was returning to Hyderabad. The model o...
^
Line 5, column 98, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'E5480 the latest'.
Suggestion: E5480 the latest
...erabad. The model of the laptop is DELL E5480 latest version.My identity card was pasted on ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 119, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: My
...the laptop is DELL E5480 latest version.My identity card was pasted on back side o...
^^
Line 5, column 227, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: black
... blue color leather bag. The laptop was black in color and i recently bought it for my persona...
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Line 7, column 51, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ng from my hometown with heavy luggage. I kept my laptop bag on the upper birth. ...
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Line 7, column 112, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...on the upper birth. In the morning when i woke the train reached to station. In a...
^
Line 7, column 161, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e train reached to station. In a hurry, i forgot the bag on the same seat and cam...
^
Line 7, column 254, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...he train. It was the last station where i get down from compartment. By that time...
^
Line 7, column 301, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...own from compartment. By that time when i am leaving there were no passengers lef...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, so, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1002.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 234.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.28205128205 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30553872288 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 302.4 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0383951486 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.8 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197749136047 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598736850284 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589214643948 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103216858553 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669987360141 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.25 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.